Crit Feedback

Todays crit was useful in some areas as I got some little tips on how to push the cover designs further, however my deadline for Secret 7 was 2 weeks which it has been now- I will make some of the changes that I feel are most relevant such as adding some hand made collages to the designs.

Some feedback also mentioned to maybe loose the type on the stickers, however previous peer feedback mentioned that the type based sticker developments were better than the pattern and image based designs.

• Incorporate some handmade collages, relates to the concept of physical touch and body (the track focuses on this. Mix hand made collage with digital collage
• The type doesn’t do much for the stickers, maybe keep them just image based too
• Remove the ‘hey you up’ on the first stage, since none of the other ones use type it feels a bit out of place, especially since they’re meant to be purely image based with no type
• The sticker designs could use one bit of imagery from the digital collage, e.g just the telephone