I have started to develop the design for the back of the CD and vinyl further through acting on feedback that I was given in my group crit on Monday from Beth.
The feedback: I really like how you’ve related the designs to the concept of the album, particularly with the title and then the lines that give it a nice flow through the whole album! maybe you could try rearranging some of the writing, like the tracklist for instance to fit in with the losing control idea a little more so they could be arranged a bit more freely, like using the whole space of the back? - Beth
I really liked this comment as I was finding the tracklist design on the back a little boring even though I'd finalised it, the idea to arrange the type more freely with the wavy lines was useful.
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| Original Finalised Back Design |
Below shows the design for the tracklist on the back developed further, I decided to arrange the type against the lines and curved around them in a more playful way which is a lot more interesting and relates with the concept better.
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| Developed |
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| Developed and Refined Further |
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| Final |
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